This work in progress has been on the back burner for a long time. In fact, I feel confident in saying that putting it there is what crippled my writing. It was the first moment of me not writing the story of my heart and, instead, writing what I thought would sell.
Newsflash: nothing sold AND I have not finished a manuscript since I put this one away. This one has haunted me. I thought it was the ghost of my dearly departed first book that held me back, but it was this one. This story is so intensely personal in that the wood I describe is the same wood where I lived as a child. The longing and the full sensory experience is so real. As for the story as a whole? Not even sort of based on real life.
My biggest struggle with this story was whether to build the romance or the paranormal element as the primary story. I like to think they're balanced and, ultimately, it's about a woman who realizes she deserves happiness (as are all my stories. So whether it's a paranormal romantic thriller or a paranormal thriller with romantic elements will remain to be seen.
Thank you to Raquel Byrnes for the title. I've been calling it Sexy Trees (because there are trees in the book and there's sexiness, but not sex with trees - different genre) and finally have something a little more respectable.
Just for fun, here's a sneak peak at the prologue.
Newsflash: nothing sold AND I have not finished a manuscript since I put this one away. This one has haunted me. I thought it was the ghost of my dearly departed first book that held me back, but it was this one. This story is so intensely personal in that the wood I describe is the same wood where I lived as a child. The longing and the full sensory experience is so real. As for the story as a whole? Not even sort of based on real life.
My biggest struggle with this story was whether to build the romance or the paranormal element as the primary story. I like to think they're balanced and, ultimately, it's about a woman who realizes she deserves happiness (as are all my stories. So whether it's a paranormal romantic thriller or a paranormal thriller with romantic elements will remain to be seen.
Thank you to Raquel Byrnes for the title. I've been calling it Sexy Trees (because there are trees in the book and there's sexiness, but not sex with trees - different genre) and finally have something a little more respectable.
Just for fun, here's a sneak peak at the prologue.
Prologue
Pain
of fusion, heat, pressure, and the sudden chill of wind and rain seared my
first memory into being. Mother beneath me heaving and stilling only to surge
again and again, pressing me higher into the emptiness above, left me solitary.
Sense of purpose filled me, my granite roots deep and joined with my brethren.
Together we were one with the core. We pulsed with power born of raw elemental
violence. Always united but each alone, dark night and misty morning.
Surrounded by empty earth, I longed for more, to feel the warmth of the burning
star and to taste the dew. With each burst of my energy, the land around me
awakened and blossomed, new life twining inexorably my channel to the beating
heart of earth. Vibrant and fertile, life and death surrounded me and became
woven into my very fiber. I nourished my children, the five reaching higher and
broader, sending out shoots of their own until the land around me teemed with
my progeny. Awake, aware, and embraced, I felt the world above as never before
and I felt joy.
Man
came late, leaving footprints, proof of their ambition and determination. They
needed me, the safe haven of my bower. They called me sacred, god, goddess,
Aine, menhir, and my children the Duir, the oak. In return, man paid homage to
me with ritual and respect. Together my children and man flourished. I reached
out to know them and found one who accepted me—a child. Open and innocent, our
beings joined and her people called her the guardian. Our bond was as sacred to
them as the life I gave, the grove I bore, the beams of moonlight that joined
me to all. I gave the guardian access to the pulse from within my core to
protect my children and that guardian gave their breath to upholding our bond.
I treasure the guardians, once called Druids, who gave themselves to me. I am
the bone, my oaken children are my nerves, my veins. The guardians, for there
have been many, give me their pleasure and their pain. Through them I have
sight and scent, taste and sound. They sing to me and I hold their memories
within my immortality.
Man
seldom seeks me at the glade now. Those that dare, only take and never give
back. I feel the tendrils of my influence shrinking and their apathy kills all
I love.
I
have been and will continue to be the lifeblood of this land. I will do
whatever necessary to protect what is mine. We will flourish no matter the
obstacle. I will never allow anyone or anything to interrupt the cycle held
deep within the roots and boughs I have born. I know this as I know the winds
and rain that wear my skin, the moss that absorbs my warmth. My children with
thrive again because the guardian has returned.
1 comment:
Superb title, absolutely perfect. Looking forward to more.
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