tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post1493469788690585110..comments2023-09-08T09:05:26.912-07:00Comments on Erin Kane Spock: Romantic Friday WritersErin Kane Spockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-21897340679718312532012-10-28T00:22:36.797-07:002012-10-28T00:22:36.797-07:00A sensuous story and if this is how you write, i a...A sensuous story and if this is how you write, i am ready to read your novel. There is music in your words and poetry in your expressions :)<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831956192459960019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-37581258601789090282012-10-27T18:52:40.401-07:002012-10-27T18:52:40.401-07:00Whoa, this definitely sent chills down my spine. I...Whoa, this definitely sent chills down my spine. I think you could give the "50 Shades of Grey" author a run for your money. :P So much going on here -- I liked it! <br /><br />Apologies, I am just now getting through all of the House of Horrors excerpts. Hope you're having a great weekend! <br /><br />~Wendy Lu<br /><br /><a href="http://xtheredangelx.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">The Red Angel Blog</a>Wendy Luhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08048944852796207898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-2158577731521616592012-10-21T13:48:20.573-07:002012-10-21T13:48:20.573-07:00Dear Erin,
I don't need to repeat all the prai...Dear Erin,<br />I don't need to repeat all the praise you already have received for this story. I agree! It is sensual and captivating. Wonderful blend of the brewing storm and their naked bodies outside in the rain and idea that she or both of them are possessed.<br /><br />I am so glad that you decided yo participate in this challenge for Halloween. I think I would like reading your novels. I'll try to do that.<br /><br />Thank you so much for your kind words about my story. It means a lot to me. It keeps me wanting to try a little harder.<br /><br />Hope to read your text for the next challenge in December, <i>Holiday Spirit</i>. I will try to participate too.<br /><br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br />For the benefit of other readers:<br /><a href="http://annas-adornments.blogspot.se/2012/10/halloween-house-of-horrors-rfw.html" rel="nofollow">RFW No. 46 - 'Jenny Holland's Robinson Crusoe Halloween'</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-63865437872861451272012-10-21T12:42:05.108-07:002012-10-21T12:42:05.108-07:00Turbulent, emotional, and somewhat erotic. Nice de...Turbulent, emotional, and somewhat erotic. Nice description of the storm playing on bare skin.<br /><br />I like her ethereal personality. Nicely done and perfect for the this prompt.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-76063972897780179462012-10-21T05:18:44.409-07:002012-10-21T05:18:44.409-07:00Stormy, steamy and scary! Good combination ;)Stormy, steamy and scary! Good combination ;)Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-68189434795357974462012-10-21T00:01:16.978-07:002012-10-21T00:01:16.978-07:00Sensual and elemental. Great imagery and visual e...Sensual and elemental. Great imagery and visual effects. Wow, this is totally out there. I am intrigued Erin.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-55203831394041514322012-10-20T22:15:52.015-07:002012-10-20T22:15:52.015-07:00Best of luck with the judging! I'm glad it'...Best of luck with the judging! I'm glad it's Ann and Nas who have to choose from this awesome lineup! :DDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-1493364627096850332012-10-20T20:04:25.759-07:002012-10-20T20:04:25.759-07:00What a powerful, elemental story Erin. The storm e...What a powerful, elemental story Erin. The storm evoked primal emotions. Very sensual descriptions. A perfect story for the horror 'fest. <br /><br />I see you're powering along, completing so many novels. How is your quest for representation going? I wish you every success and thank you so much for popping up again on our submissions board! :DDenise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-59910200056114286122012-10-20T16:11:32.184-07:002012-10-20T16:11:32.184-07:00Hi Erin
Possessed lovers, very creepy. If I where ...Hi Erin<br />Possessed lovers, very creepy. If I where Philippe I'd be asking who is this woman. But then he is enchanted. Well written. Welcome back.<br />NancyN. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-16843780323409614542012-10-20T07:42:38.289-07:002012-10-20T07:42:38.289-07:00Hi,
Nicely executed with the storm driving the s...Hi,<br /><br />Nicely executed with the storm driving the scene and sparking the atmosphere. Then the tawny beauty of woman embracing the fury of the elements. Deadly attractive and sensually potent story. Lovely! <br />;)<br /><br />best<br />F Francine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-38787879209299464822012-10-20T06:17:28.418-07:002012-10-20T06:17:28.418-07:00Definitely creepy & romantic. I like how you d...Definitely creepy & romantic. I like how you developed Philippe's character. Your story gripped me from the beginning and held me until the end. Lovely. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02691497935668743387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-82627237769943133662012-10-19T17:34:56.984-07:002012-10-19T17:34:56.984-07:00You painted the scene very well...there is a hint ...You painted the scene very well...there is a hint of sensuality blending with the power and rawness of the storm ~<br /><br />Enjoyed this read ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-62285805173552038112012-10-19T16:41:23.148-07:002012-10-19T16:41:23.148-07:00Thank you for the feedback.
@ Yolanda, she's ...Thank you for the feedback. <br />@ Yolanda, she's already possessed and he is in process of being possessed, ending the selection with his body being used. If that didn't come across, then I need to revise.Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-38855116602047389662012-10-19T16:31:59.654-07:002012-10-19T16:31:59.654-07:00Reading just this section for the first time in ag...Reading just this section for the first time in ages, I caught tons of word repetition. Yikes.Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-9869439194951011412012-10-19T14:28:02.959-07:002012-10-19T14:28:02.959-07:00Steamy and well-written.
Suggestion: avoid cli...Steamy and well-written. <br /><br />Suggestion: avoid cliches like "neat freak". It weakens the writing.Susan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-40901851190981480942012-10-19T13:09:36.734-07:002012-10-19T13:09:36.734-07:00You write spooky demon possessions very well. I he...You write spooky demon possessions very well. I held my breath for a while. :)Kiru Tayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03285263322486836620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-20165940972248988452012-10-19T11:28:32.798-07:002012-10-19T11:28:32.798-07:00Nice imagery.
Have both been possessed or just h...Nice imagery. <br /><br />Have both been possessed or just her?<br /><br />He's definitely acting like a real man, she's more spooky, ethereal. <br /><br />Can't wait to find out the answers!Yolanda Renéehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09085436784133103221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-8501320690876593162012-10-19T08:20:04.900-07:002012-10-19T08:20:04.900-07:00Ooh- er - I like the way you used the elements of ...Ooh- er - I like the way you used the elements of the violent storm to emphasis the emotions and turmoils of your characters. Sallyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14090018804016223955noreply@blogger.com