tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post1049322550566472135..comments2023-09-08T09:05:26.912-07:00Comments on Erin Kane Spock: Terror Tuesday BlogfestErin Kane Spockhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-61942923368202132302010-06-13T08:54:13.936-07:002010-06-13T08:54:13.936-07:00I had hoped to make Mary so single minded in purpo...I had hoped to make Mary so single minded in purpose that she did not event think about herself. I also wanted her to be proactive in the rescuing of herself so she wouldn't be "Save me, big man!" type of stereotype. Did I take her too far? Is she not believable?Erin Kane Spockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05376851676240606472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-59675772373325974142010-06-08T09:15:51.939-07:002010-06-08T09:15:51.939-07:00I love this scene. The urgency and the terror are ...I love this scene. The urgency and the terror are all very exciting. I like that your sequence is packed with visual details and that makes it much more real to me.<br /><br />Great job.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3937582163976319064.post-80382193830069176562010-06-08T08:51:28.537-07:002010-06-08T08:51:28.537-07:00Mary's quite the woman. You did a good job of ...Mary's quite the woman. You did a good job of creating fright, tension, and determination. In her place, I might have had a twinge or two of fear for myself. Good job. RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.com